Off-cuts and Out-takes

24th May 2020       

 From off the cutting room floor..... 

       A gusty, blustery Cornish wind rocked the campervan all night, and did funny things with a metal joint in the pop-top above our heads, the ‘wasp’ thing we heard during the night about a week ago. But last night we discovered that, under a steadily increasing range of Cornish coastal wind strengths from the right direction, it actually has an entire vocabulary of noises.

       It starts with a gentle mosquito impression .... (dzzzzz dzzzzz dzzzzz) .... adds a bumble bee as the breeze picks up .... (bozzzzmm bozzzzmm BOZZzzzmm) .... then goes to blowfly-in-death-throes .... (RUZZZZ RUZZZZ RUZZZZ) .... next, as the wind touches Force 3, the drone of a bagpipe cuts in .... (SKROWWLL ROWWLLL YOWWWLL ROWWLL) .... on into frantic bursts of demented clarinet as the van wheels begin to lift off the ground .... (SWWWEE-EEEEE-EEEE-EEEEKK!!) .... and finally goes supersonic in the dog-driving-crazy range.

       A thousand cocker spaniels in a thirty mile radius would’ve had a bad night last night. All about 2am. Same as us.

       – from “Haggis And Silver Birch Wine”

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        He goes by, a very large man with a very small motor scooter clenched between his thighs. He’s hunched into the blustery head wind, and he has the poor little thing wound up absolutely flat strap and making a tortured sound like a large and very angry blowfly caught in a tin can... ...

EeeeeEeeeeEeeeeEeeeeEeeeeEeeee

        - one morning, in passing

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 (Jemma and Joey, talking....)

       Joey says, pointedly...

       “You were always Nan’s favourite. And Dad’s. And Rebecca was given away and made into a princess, so she was THEIR favourite. I wasn’t ANY-one’s favourite.”

       Jemma doesn’t say anything for a while, but then...

       “You were MY favourite,” and Joey looks away, but with the hint of something, around her eyes, a reluctant pleasure maybe.

        - cut from “Jemma Raglan”

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        “He only had one hand but it didn’t seem to bother him. He said it saved him loads of time not having to cut his left fingernails and then he couldn’t cut his right ones even if he wanted to...”

        – extract from “Booki And Finn” (a WIP)

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        “Murph said anyone with half a brain should keep some mystery around themselves...”

        - extract from “Booki And Finn” (a WIP)

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        Herself tells me (very pointedly) that she thought of digging out the Qantas earplugs from the little passenger comfort-kits they now hand out, but she can’t stand things in her ears, so half way over India seriously thought of jamming them up my nostrils instead.

       “I don’t snore!” (indignant)

       “Look,” (exasperated), “Take a sheet of three-ply, chop a bit out of the very middle, and get someone to hold it up in the air while you slowly pull a length of barbed wire back and forth through the hole. You sound something like that. It’s hard to ignore. It vibrates the window glass.”

       “Ah, bullshit!”

       “Just ask the pilot!” 

                - extract from “Pilgrim’s Hotpot”

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