The short story that I way too hastily put up a few weeks back, has been seriously re-visited and turned into something that I'm happy to put my name to.
One of the serious faults of the first effort was that it was too long, and I knew it, but I went ahead anyway, because I was impatient and a boofhead. NEVER put out there something you haven't put aside for a week or two AFTER you reckon it's finished, so you can have a good think about it. Mull it around in your head and ponder what it's supposedly about. Marvellous what can pop into your mind to make it much better.
Anyway, as it turns out, I didn't cut it down, but turned it into a four-parter. Something I've not tried before, and I'm happy with the result. Along with some serious editing.
The LAST part is now up on The Workshop. See what you reckon....
Cheers...
T.R.E.
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